Responses to Hannah's RP Plan

Responses to Hannah's RP Introduction:

I think the introduction part is pretty gd~The direction is clear~It's gd to have a statistical data that shows the potential risk of IAD. But in the end of the introduction, it's better to show out reasons of how IAD can affect people physically and mentally so that your position can become more persuasive.

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Responses to Hannah's First Hand Data Plan:

A questionnaire will be useful, but I think you have to be careful when you design the questions in the questionnaire since your focus is on how IAD affects people "physically and mentally".
Hope my opinion cau help you in some ways. Add oil la~^^